Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to the future generations.
Every person has its own way or style of living. We can see this by taking an example of our own and our parents. Some thinks that life lived by today's generation is very happening and stress less. But other have the opinion that the life lived by the parents is quite peaceful and calm. According to me, life lived my the parents is really good. Let's take a glance over this.
Parents are the one with a lot of responsibilities over them whereas their children might be enjoying at that moment. Parents use to live and always like to have a quite environment.For example, I'am from a place which is very calm and pollution free. So my parents love that place and want to spend their whole life at that place because that place makes them stress less and the environment of that place keeps them healthy.
Coming to the life of this generation, as the most of the children doesn't have much responsibilities they like to chill with friends, go out for parties and enjoy. With this regular routine they get used to this kind of environment of cities with a lot of rush and noise. They get used to the hangouts with their friends. For example, I have a habit of going out to malls on every Saturday for watching movies and shopping. And obviously this is not possible for me when I'm with my parents.
According to me, the life lived by the parents will be more satisfying to future generations because all this fun in cities are limited to some age and it gets boring as the age passes. Therefore, the generation of future should always choose a life lived by their parents because enjoyment can also be done with family members. It not always true that we need to do parties for getting relaxed. For example, we can plan a vacation with parents and enjoy with peace and calmness.
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, therefore, whereas, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50153846154 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41959261083 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501538461538 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8121249575 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2777777778 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176947917781 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587138070028 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372310003618 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108647693814 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429237950431 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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