Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
As the year's pass, everything changes from head to toe, even people. It could be enough just to look 20 years ago, and we can see a great difference. There a lot of differences that have changed, but I will count some of them: people’s thoughts, a way of living and technology. All these 3 are most important factors.
First of all, in the past years, people lived in different ways for transport and entertainment. Years ago people never would use bus or car because there wasn’t, they would travel near place by feet, and for long distances, they would use horse carriages. However, now people have their own cars or public transports for their traveling. Even today, people do not walk to near destination and said that it is so unhealthy.
Secondly, people’s thoughts are different and they do not think with the same mind of modern people. For example, in the past people don’t let their daughters study, but know girls travel to abroad to study, even they demand parents to have their own career. Another example is, in the past people could not wear dresses like they want, but know they dress what they want and no one cares about them.
In addition, technology is the most important factor that affects our life. If you have mentioned now you can see phone and computer in everyone’s hand and they can control something from. I just want to mention a simple example, in the past most of the people who want to read the news they would buy some newspapers and they would read what daily news from it. Nevertheless, now a few people buy the newspaper, others read all of it from the internet. Even internet created such comfort for people to have business from the internet, although people have to think or give a struggle to have career decades before.
In conclusion, people everything changed, but in favor or not depend on the situation. For old people, these years are not good enough to live and it is time for ill breaded people. However, for youth, it is the most affordable time to live and you can do everything easily.
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- why go to university? 80
- Should government spend money on improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, and subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. 60
- A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'would' and 'use'.
Suggestion: would never use
...ort and entertainment. Years ago people never would use bus or car because there wasn't, t...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...ld not wear dresses like they want, but know they dress what they want and no one ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55278030708 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8327807749 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6315789474 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828642185655 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295243097735 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296563789414 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476143679999 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151090893424 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.