Of course we need foods in our lives like our ascendant but ere our food and their food the same ?of course no,our environment has been changed,pollution is every where and thus our food changed according to this. Irrigation water, sole and weather, all of these are elements for farming and thus for food .
and when one of these elements has a pollutant it means unhealthy food .
Chemical wastes from factories , smoke from factories or people and the nuclear wastes are modern pollutants .
modern pollutants means modern diseases which come from the unhealthy food.
modern diseases mean modern brains which will be unhealthy brains , and the disaster is when these brains are unhealthy in a not apparent shape, and when these brains control some parts of the others lives.
Therefore no doubt when we protect our foods we protect ourselves from the ugly control of the secret-diseased brains
besides the common diseases.
Of course we need foods in our lives like our ascendant but ere our food and their food the same ?of course no, person <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">has been changed </span>our environment ,pollution is everywhere and thus our food changed according to this. Irrigation water, sole and weather, these are elements for farming and thus for food,and when one of these elements polluted, it means unhealthy food .
Chemical wastes from factories , smoke from factories or people and the nuclear wastes are modern pollutants .
modern pollutants mean modern diseases which come from the unhealthy food.
modern diseases mean modern brains which will be unhealthy brains , and the disaster is when these brains are unhealthy in a not clear shape, and when these brains control some parts of the others lives.
Therefore no doubt when we protect our foods we protect ourselves from the ugly control of the secret-diseased brains
besides the common diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, so, therefore, thus, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 1977.66487455 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 407.700716846 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45033112583 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03888089374 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 212.727598566 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 618.680645161 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9183506949 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.166666667 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466124891551 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202456594976 0.076458572812 265% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.247454472994 0.0737576698707 335% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170151630501 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.247652890957 0.0645574589148 384% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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