one of the most importance things in my life is a book.
for two reasons. first, it is present from my lovely sister.
second, it has many different text about life style.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Flavinha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... one of the most importance things in my life is a book. for two reasons. first...
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...ortance things in my life is a book. for two reasons. first, it is present from ...
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... my life is a book. for two reasons. first, it is present from my lovely sister. ...
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... it is present from my lovely sister. second, it has many different text about life ...
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...from my lovely sister. second, it has many different text about life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 43.0788530466 9% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 52.1666666667 8% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 142.0 1977.66487455 7% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 32.0 407.700716846 8% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4375 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.37841423001 4.48103885553 53% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.26987747467 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 28.0 212.727598566 13% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.875 0.524837075471 167% => OK
syllable_count: 44.1 618.680645161 7% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 8.0 20.1344086022 40% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.5944701738 48.9658058833 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 35.5 100.406767564 35% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.0 20.6045352989 39% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0668933286321 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332190009348 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371880713456 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442920012464 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367898290783 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.5 11.7677419355 30% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.28 58.1214874552 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.1 10.1575268817 40% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.1 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 5.0 86.8835125448 6% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.0 10.002688172 30% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.0537634409 52% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.247311828 39% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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