Do you agree of disagree with the following statements? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is inevitable for one to lose their old friends once they decide to move to a new place. Thus, some people view it as a bad decision only because they do not want to leave their friends. However, I totally disagree with the idea with the following reasons. Nowadays, the Internet connects people tightly than ever before - people will not lose their old friends when they move as long as they still have contacts of them. There are numerous applications available such as Facebook, WhatsApp, Twitter, etc. that keep people stay connected with each other, even if those who are distant from each other. They can text, email, and video chat with their friends all the way across the globe wherever there is a signal. Therefore, people who move to another city or even a country can still meet their old friends frequently online. What is more, people who move, by any chance, can come back to their previous residence place easily by trains and flights, to get back together with their old friends within hours, no matter how far they have moved. Therefore, people would not completely lose their friends thanks to the development of modern technologies. People should move to have more important reasons that surpass the importance of those old friendships. To fulfill their own dreams, they may be willing to give up living close with old friends. The dream can range from a job offer, and a better environment for living, to a pursuit of a changing life and freedom. People should take their dreams seriously because they live for themselves, rather than anyone else. They have the freedom to not let the past restrain them from chasing for their life goals, and moving to a new place is, assuredly, one of the ways that they have to step out. After they moved, they will appreciate themselves for making the right decision because what they get is often so much more than they had expected. Take me as an example. I moved to a city because I got tired of the unfriendly teachers in my original school. Although I had a sense of loss of my old friends, my grade improved a lot as I moved to the new school and the teachers there are all very nice to me. To sum up, one should always stick to their head when making decisions about moving to a new place for two reasons: they would not lose their old friends completely and they will find a better self as they move.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57411764706 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31791792419 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524705882353 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1015184132 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360100745762 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116742584042 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677004345395 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360100745762 0.150856017488 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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