Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Generally, the point that our friends have profound impacts on our life is indisputable. In this regard, while a vast majority of people deem that the disadvantage of moving to a new country is that a person lose their intimate friends, others strongly disapprove of this notion. Personally, I believe that regardless of losing friends, moving to a new country has lots of benefits that compensates its disadvantages. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.

The first significant reason that should be taken into consideration is that by moving to a new atmosphere, we will have a golden chance to make new freindships, and hone valuable skills, so we should not lose this chance because of missing old friends. To be more specific, one of the best adavantages of living abroad is that people can expand their networking by getting aquated with various people with different characteristic traits, and this networking is a valuable skill that will definately assist people to have a secure job in the future. Moreover, a new atmosphere makes you be receptive to fresh ideas, and analyze distinctive perspectives that all of them are worthwhile because they expand your critical thinking, so if we opt for remaining in a same place because of our freind, we will not be a successful person in the future, and we will not be able to improve in our life.

Second, thanks to the Internet, people can keep in touch with each other all around the world easily, so losing friends cannot be a serious issue for immigrants. As a matter of fact, the Internet has completely altered the way carring out taskes, and streamline many process like communication. In other words, the Internet distort the meaning of distanse, so no matter where you are you can keep in touch with your relatives any time that you want. In addition, by using social media, people can share their new experices with thier intimate friend without limitation which strengthen their bonds. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this; last year, I had to go abroad because of my project about population effects on air pollution, I hesitated to travel since I missed my family and friend, but I tried to talk with my friends on Instagram, and share my moments with them, explained my circumstances. Had I not had access to the Internet, I would have missed my intimate friends.

In conclusion, I strongly belive that people should not lose the chance of traveling to new countries because of losing friends. This is because we will be provided with the chance of aquring valuable skills, making new freinships, and keep in touch with out old friends by using the Internet.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
^
Line 10, column 251, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...aking new freinships, and keep in touch with out old friends by using the Internet.
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88671023965 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80884248744 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492374727669 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1051275327 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.533333333 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27087111012 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948205820609 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533098621464 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178386384523 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275732404343 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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