Do you agree with the following statement? Schools should focus more on science and mathematics than on humanities courses.
Benefits and drawbacks of courses has been a controversial issue in the community lately. While some people claim that science and mathematics have some significant benefits, others keep up that they constitute a number of undeniable profits. Because, humanities courses should find in syllabus. Although both sides have several pros and cons, ı am think that humanities courses offer have several advantages. There is valuable for society and attractive to many business. I will elucidate the details of my support with some tangible detail an examples in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, humanities courses have many benefits and advantages. When Students graduate school, they lack of social ability. Because our schools do not give enough courses about humanity. Nowadays, some people are under the stress on digital life, they lose to relations with family members and other people. they do not know how struggle with this. Community compose of people who have emotions, feelings and thinkings. Due to the humanity courses students learn that creates human nature. Moreover, public has some valuable judgement which should transfer to the next generations.
Secondly, students have divisive factors among the business life that affects career way. All of world has undergone digital converting which is milestone in this era. Computer programs thinks solutions for our problems, but they are formed with codes which have not humanity concept. Some head hunters search for social workers who achieve public. They can find job easily. For example, people resources department or guest relations.
Some people believe that the sciences courses more important than humanities courses. Supporters of this idea claim that science and mathematics will increase the children talent. However, ı am at variance with these statements. Humanities courses can increase student social ability. Thanks to this, they feel emotion other people. They can do empathy. Invalidate their claim with these statements.
To sum up, schools should do some regulations on syllabus. Schools can be creative on courses. They may give integrated courses in a semester. Students have improve their humanities thanks to this that facilitates job routines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59237536657 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62444829701 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4771644804 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5161290323 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0 20.6045352989 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.58064516129 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214973081002 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567421676516 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579847445122 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132960723041 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591462574304 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.96 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.