Saying that childhood is the happiest time of a person's life can safely be considered an understatement. It embodies the best and unforgettable moments in a person's life. It's the period when it seems like you've got the love, care and attention of everybody. It's the only time that you'll commit serious 'unintended' crimes and just happen to get away with it. It's the time when you are free from any form of responsibility.
Most significant among all the privileges of being a child is the love, care, preference, and attention you get from family members and older people. When i was five, my elder sister and I went skating. That was my very first attempt at it, while she was at last, a better skater. We both bumped (not unexpectedly though) into each other and sustained injuries. People came to our rescue. They first of all carried me up, checked if I was injured, before they turned around to blame my elder sister for my injuries. Actually, I was the person at fault.
Another thing about being a child is that you can actually commit serious crimes, and get away with it. Parents find it hard to punish their little children for 'unintended' crimes. For instance, my younger brother recently broke my mum's favourite tumbler, and got away without as much as a scolding. But some weeks ago, I tipped that same tumbler and had my pocket money withheld. I mean, children don't just get punished for their offenses, and even if they do, it's always a minor punishment.
Finally, childhood is the period of time when you are totally free from every form of responsibility. As a result, they tend to get engaged in various activities. They join different clubs at school, go out for regular sports, visit amusement parks, and go out for numerous excursions. you get visit places that you would never again get the chance to visit, take pictures, and so on.
In one word, childhood is that period that cannot be re-lived. It's something that's treasured forever. Childhood is indeed, the happiest time of one's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, so, while, another thing, for instance, i mean, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57438410351 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576704545455 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6824857297 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137592295226 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466894223374 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709488223706 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905320262623 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622462816769 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.