Do you agree or disagree? Company should pay for employees to get university degree
In today’s modern life, thanks to the technological breakthrough in every section of science the way of life altered dramatically. I personally scibescribe to the view that comopanies should have alternative chances for people who wants to continue their educations. this practic lead them to be more productive and learn advanced knowledge and improve their skills also they would have more selfconfident. In the following paragraphs my reasons will be elaboreted on in more detail.
To begin with, it is undeinable that universities provid higher education and give the aportunity to nature specialists in variety of sectors. Generally speaking, companies invest money on the eria, which gives them the most profits in the future. Actulally in my opinion, the more letreture, the more improvments. employees who have frequently pasionate to learn new things, on the other hands, with this policy would be more productive try to utelize from this oportunity as much as they can. As case in point, one of my classmates was a student which her company intruduced her to uiniversy and pay tutation fee. She have competed with her colleges to win this scholarship, resulting to study more and be best in our class. Moreover, she can using every methods that the profossors teaches directly in her job, being uptodate and more productive.
Another reasons why I believe companies should invest their monies for higher education is that belife and thoughts would be fostered in universities. In fact, they provid a ocation to each person has the chance to speak , claims, and listen to diferent ideas. In this situaton individuals improve their skills such as asserting, defencing, and criticing their ideas and believes. As a mather of fact just as academic consepts attribute individuals to meture their abilities, so can they be resilience to the new ideas. It palys crurical rols in the characteristics of people. To delve more into it, indicating ideas, each person take more selfconfidenc. As a case in point, I would illustrate my experience. I used to be a shy person and ettending to university was a life altering experience for me. Umder the force of professors and classmates, I learned to how I can expresse my ideas and thoughts. I have learned to speak and contribute to class debates and also it boostered my self confideces.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentoned above, I belive that it would be a practical policy for companies if they invest the money on higher education. Not only do it has advantages for companies such as more skilled labor, more productive employees, and more update specialistes, but also it attending to the universites nature indicudualls with campability of experssing and defencing ides, resulting to improve selfconfidence of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1766004415 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03715741069 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527593818985 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7283190419 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.956521739 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6956521739 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995430923819 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276064637357 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380082408212 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671744443766 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261060674383 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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