It is a rollercoaster of emotions when the college is about to end students need to find a job and finally start contributing to the society. The pressure one has to get placed is tough in its own ways. Given a country like India there are a lot of graduates and good amount of jobs which rises great deal of competition. The the companies also try their best to attract as many good talents as possible.
One of the good tactics to grab young and fresh grads is to offer them higher education facilities through the company. There are many students who are out-standing and want to pursue higher education but their financial status holds them back, offers likes these are a plus point to both company and the employees. This will encourage other students to join the companies offering these programs as students want to be independent and be less of a burden to their parents. And it will also be a gain to the company as their employees will have improved cv, better exposure and in-depth knowledge in their respectful fields which will be beneficial to the company.
On the other hand, there is also a factor that the employee may quit the company after finishing their higher studies sponsored by the company and jump to a better a different company for various other factors. So the company sponsoring the employee's degree sings a contract with them to work for the company after finishing their degree.
In conclusion I believe that is a good thing that the companies pay for employee to get a university degree, as they get to keep the talent and also harness the best out of them and also give them a opportunity to flourish.
- Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand Give specific reasons for your positions 70
- Many people believe that it ts very important to make large amounts of money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living Analyze each view point and take a stand Give specific reasons for your opinion 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Companies should pay for employees to get a university degree 60
- School teachers have found that this year more and more students copy homework from others which one of the following choices is the best way to reduce this phenomenon 1 parents shoud supervise t 66
- Most people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money but others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
... which rises great deal of competition. The the companies also try their best to attrac...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...gh the company. There are many students who are out-standing and want to pursue higher ...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the best out of them and also give them a opportunity to flourish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6529209622 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56135721306 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3178327983 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.090909091 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17901727132 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689754201732 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774340542704 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123322478312 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813101347818 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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