Do you agree or disagree with the following sentence. "there is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way".

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Do you agree or disagree with the following sentence. "there is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way".

”There is only one definition of success- to be able to spend your life in your own way.", the author of this statement relates success directly to freedom, freedom to live your life in your own way. I agree with the statement because of the following reasons.

Some people believe that definition of success changes from person to person, for instance, some people might define success as financial freedom, and some say success is glory. However, they are all pointing towards the same idea i.e. achieving what a person long for. For example, definition of success for <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">legendary</span> Indian cricketer Sachin Tendulkar would be his career record, on the other hand, businessman like Robert Kiyosaki's definition of success would be pointing towards his bank account. The above two definition of success are different from one another, however they represent the same thing i.e. the will of the person defining it, or what the person wants from life.

The common notion of people is that no matter what a person is doing, if he is highly paid for it, then the person is successful. Is it true? No it's not. This is explained with the help of an Indian movie named 3 idiots. In this movie the protagonist is studying in an engineering school, his father wants him to become an engineer because of high status in society and high pay. However, he want to become a wild life photographer, he do not want higher pay, he want to live his dream of becoming a wild life photographer. In the end of the movie he confronts his father and becomes a wild life photographer. This example is the apotheosis of the definition "success is to be able to spend your life in your own way."

For epitomizing, even if the definition of success changes from person to person, its final meaning is the same for all. Therefore, the statement "there is only one definition of success- to be able to spend your life in your own way" holds true for every person. Hence it is the perfect definition of success.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...he person is successful. Is it true? No its not. This is explained with the help of...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st is studying in an engineering school, his father wants him to become an engine...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...us in society and high pay. However, he want to become a wild life photographer, he ...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... to become a wild life photographer, he do not want higher pay, he want to live hi...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ographer, he do not want higher pay, he want to live his dream of becoming a wild li...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... way' holds true for every person. Hence it is the perfect definition of success...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90028490028 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1322191798 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464387464387 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2687831129 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326256489897 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110446085279 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141874151507 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264266745527 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155572918489 0.0645574589148 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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