Friendship is a necessary relashionship that helps maintin stability. It is based on ethical values such as love, care and honesty. After all, we all want to gain a true friendship and share with them the path of life.
However, there is a controversy about whether to build or maintain friendships.
Some people believe that it's better to make new friends. Yet, others might think that we should keep our old friends for a long period.
For me, I frimly confirm the former viewpoint for reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, as the time goes on, we face several paths and choice that seperates us from our surroundings. They make us share similarities with other people and build friendships based on harmony.
For example, when I chose my graduation university, I was seperated from my friends. At first, I felt lonely but after a periode of time I made some new friendships.
Unlike what I was expecting, we became like a family and we shared moments of joy and happiness.
Another major point is that making new friends can help us enlarge our connections, encourage us to be more productive and enlarge our knowledge.
From my personal experience, I needed to start a project related to medecine and as I made a connection with a new friend who is a doctor, and we collaborated to run this idea.
This clearly depicts the fact that new friends could help us reach higher positions and escape from the limitations.
Ultimately, old friends could change and affect your life badly. That's why it is better to be alone than with bad company as the proverb says.
For instance, some people become harmful and spread negativity since the personality is built through time.
Therefore, we must get rid of such relationships and replace it with the ones who really care for us.
This points that the new company could save us from being attached to toxic minds.
In a nutshell, It's beneficial to make new friendships as they can have a good effect in our lives personally and professionaly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81196581197 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74477435352 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578347578348 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2397413798 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4285714286 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.53405017921 331% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224651881054 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642244670339 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360349756628 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735963742954 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382355625674 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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