Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern world with the variety of products, companies have great challenge with attracting customers and have more sells. The best way for introducing the new products and tempt people to buy them is advertisement. Although some people say that advertisements are good way to compare two different countries, some others disagree .In my opinion, advertisement is good way of knowing a country.
At first , advertisements show us famous places and famous people of a country .Most of the advertisements are some photos which are propagate as a film or publish in magazines or papers. Different locations where these movies were taken and people who take part in them can introduce the country to us. For example in an advertisement of shampoo, we can see the famous football player in of the country.
Besides , we can understand the traditions and cultures of a country through an advertisement . To make an advertisement , producers usually use traditions and cultures of community effectively to make them more impressive. We can here the music , they way the community dressing up . For example to introduce a new cooking oil , showing a family gathering in charismas night can be more effective and also leads us to understand the countries’ customs.
At last I should mention that advertisements are reflection of economic atmosphere and social demands of every country . One of the most prevalent aspects of observing each country's advertisements is the importance of advertisements in exhibiting social needs .these kinds of information can helps the industry and factories to accommodate their products to their customers in different places. For example providing suitable food products for different people with specific religious ideas.
Advertising developed to an important industry this century and by concentrating on these points provided above, the importance of suitable advertisement for each country will be admitted.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278787878788 0.229887763892 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.139393939394 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0939393939394 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0212121212121 0.046263068375 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0424242424242 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130303030303 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.25494058104 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.0309702414327 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0030303030303 0.00188951952338 160% => OK
Determiners: 0.106060606061 0.0887237588012 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242424242424 0.0209618222197 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00909090909091 0.0139019557991 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1951.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 311.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27331189711 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408360128617 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334405144695 0.251872472559 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.260450160772 0.174417080927 149% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.189710610932 0.112833075102 168% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25494058104 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 55.2970864175 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2142857143 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7758006421 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.357142857 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.54480286738 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.6548001837 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 2.17910447761 1.45489161554 150% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193144863849 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139955477413 0.103427244359 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.088351097032 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589290726776 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163398994258 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899425114369 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230608057639 0.0781384742642 30% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.285312393959 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0458846132775 0.067059652881 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128461416421 0.210909579961 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228986437654 0.0618886996521 37% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.