Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
After completing high school, students should take at least a year off to work or travel before they begin studying at a university.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people agree that high school graduation is end of an era and also beginning of another era. Personally, I believe if students are certainly aware of their interests, they should pursuit them without waste of time. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
The most significant reason is that we are living in a world which is developing with rapid pace and if we want to catch up with it, we must comprehend the value of time first. Although everyone deserves a great and long vacation after high school, spending a whole year on that will make us fall behind our rivals. According to one of my favorite teachers, the climax of a founder is also its drop point, Therefore, I am strongly of the opinion that we should not let one of our achievements deviate us from main goals, and a human being must never get stagnant in one point. Thus, the young should always maintain trying and let nothing come between them and their final goal.
Another reason that is worth mentioning is that our higher education has a close relation with our prospect job. To be more specific, the sooner we finish our university, the sooner we get our degree and thereby we find a related job. Spending a year on low careers that everyone with no expertise can do, is merely waste of time. Although we might get some valuable experiences on those jobs, still a year at academic education is more productive. My experience is a compelling example of this. When I wanted start my university education, I felt as an adult I have to make my own money, therefore I postponed university and get a job at a retailing store. Although I earned money and experience at there, I witnessed my friends embarking their higher education and getting closer to their real dream job. After four years, I was studying at university while my friends have already started their career. Had I not wasted that year at shopping store, I would have been at the same place as my classmates.
In conclusion, I believe people, especially youngsters should keep trying and take no days off to achieve their goals sooner, plus they can get into business market sooner if they get their bachelor degree faster.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55225027431 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567774936061 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9247877218 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187761393365 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608067872429 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345981757399 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102876332178 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291498852088 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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