Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the civilizes and modernized society, the hisory of evey culture will be one of the most important values in the word. Today it is axiomatic that evey societu must back to their hostory to learn a way to improve thier life. A plethora of people possesses the conviction that history must be one of the courses which shoud be study despite of the major of student field, besides they find more positive effect. Where as others might hold exactly opposite view. Althought some blieve that student must consentrait on their own lesson, I believe that every member of society must have a greart concept of knowing their own histoy. In follows, I am going to aptly delve intoe the most outstandig reason to advocate my point of view.
The fist exequisit point to be mentioned is that histoy is a basic matter if every cultur. In order to be successful and live effecialy man should know from thier culture becouse every indivituals belongs to a culture and more in a history which must familiar whith to improve the ability of good living. For example learning about our ancester that means leaning the way of thir life also learninig thier experience help us to make fundamental of our life. I remember when i study about the revolution in my country, I relized that we are not a kind of society that a crulity dominate on them. men of my country stood in front of the anmy for eight year and gain their densty in own hand. The important point here is that this story learn me to stand infront of problem and work hard to solve them. Consequently, I would not succsess in my carier had I not study histoy of my contery.
Accordingly, I should stressed that history have root in people's sprit.
Another noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that as a psycological view by learning history student train their brain. more over a northworthy statistics reveal that the amount of noruns used by brian in the time which man learn history increased and brain start to be more active. Accordingly, it improves the productivity of the brain.
To put it briefly, history is based on culture of the country and it will improve the ability of the student in future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, briefly, consequently, if, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67447916667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49569806734 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5234375 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0819274074 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153956166696 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445490394852 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379463372586 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847251222518 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023311188385 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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