Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, knowledge of the past and history of societies is of paramount importance in each country and all the people should have a basic knowalgde of their past. It gives them this opportunity to improve their strategies and tactics. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether should students take history classes or take classes with is more specialist for them. Some people possess the conviction that the former could be more fruitful whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more agreeable. I personally, content that this issue is multifaceted and should be considered in all its dimensions. we should have basic knowledge of it and take participate in these classes. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is studying history is auspicious and gives us the opinion of others' respect toward history. The are a lot of lessons and experiences behind the history and we should be aware and sensible toward them. Taking history classes can give us this prosper. Consider my personal experience to make the point more clear. When I was young, I took an Islamic class at University and it was the elected course. In this class, we learned about the Muaslem's culture and companions throughout the world. After several years when I traveled abroad the knowledge of this class helps me to introduce my country to other tourists.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that using history in our decision-making helps us to be more inquisitive.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons for taking history classes and awareness of it is captivating and has a terrific impact on our future.
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do 1 Interrupt and correct the mistake right away 2 Wait until the class or meeting is 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 85
- In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 80
- Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07260726073 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85696134101 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5079131478 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172314720903 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568734403583 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403599511959 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106227072584 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034475464775 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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