Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Currently, there is a suggestion that all university should set a requirement for students in all fields to take history courses, which has been widely discussed by people in various stages. In my perspective, however, it is ridiculous for those universities to make such a decision and I will show my opinion in the following essay.
First of all, the history classes are not always useful to students in some field. For those who major in Science, their tasks or we say, the target of doing research is exploring the physical world and then exploiting the physics regulation. As I major in the Atmospheric Science, I aim at building a network, which leads to the retrieval of satellite observation, using numerous datasets from groud-based and space-based observing machine. It is really hard to say historical knowledge make any sense to my job. In case of this, though I've hardly paid attention to my history class since high school, I got an offer to top 3 school in my country.
On top of that, taking uneccesary courses will increase the stressness to students. As all of the students today are busy with their classes nearly everyday, spending all time doing homework or research and having little spare time. The history courses, which is useless to them, obviously take their spare time that was ought to used for relaxation. Take me as an example, I have 6 different required courses that have to be finished in one single year. As a result, I get up at 8:00 in the morning and sleep at 11:00 in the evening, devoting into the study. Even though I work so hard, I can finish my assignment just on time and get an average score. That's why I regard an extra meaningless class as a waste of my energy.
In conclusion, requiring all students to take history lessons is totally a waste of their time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, then, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69182389937 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71032699029 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6509212447 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223006931071 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774888569906 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766799227577 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156905890457 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450221137151 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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