In the current decade, they are called the technology and information era, we know more about history and all the events around the world. While some people believe that technology has gone to the near end, some optimists trust that a better world could be made by humans in the future of technology. As far as I am concerned, I personally think that there is no end to the technology. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, our world has no similarity to utopia. There are still too many changes that can affect our lives. Nowadays most of the people are suffering from illnesses which can kill them or make them stay-at-home. We need more complete technologies which can recover cancers or transplant a failed organ by the new one, not only with others’ organs, but with the better one which is made by the technology. So, no one will die because of organ failure in the future.
Second, in all periods of time, people cannot believe how far technologies can progress and, in that direction, how these changes can improve their lives. For example, a thousand years ago nobody could believe that one day people could travel through the world in the air at a pace 300 to 1000 faster than their imaginations. Likewise, hundred years ago, no one could imagine that we could send and receive our voices and gestures through wireless signals immediately or send it a thousand miles away in a millisecond.
In conclusion, taking the aforementioned reasons and examples into account. I do believe that technology never stops growing. Although we do not know how technology will touch hour lives, or we do not see what we will need as our basic need from this time forth. There are some people around the world who can change the world fundamentally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...ster than their imaginations. Likewise, hundred years ago, no one could imagine that we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, likewise, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80707395498 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68216162147 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556270096463 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9373044427 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129778698675 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391056744168 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347871493911 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783347461779 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315880962714 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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