Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvements
for the quality of people's lives have already taken place.
It is an undeniable fact that science and technology have been progressing significantly during the few last decades, and have brought about magnificent changes to humans’ lives. Hence, there has been a controversial question regarding whether the notable alterations in people’s lives have already been happened or not. In this vein, some people believe that there will be no other significant improvements in humans’ lives that science and technology can make. However, other people are of the opinion that science and technology can still have a pivotal role in improving individuals’ lives. I, personally, concur with this group for two main reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First of all, regardless of all progresses in science, there are still some unsolved problems in people’s lives that their solutions have not been found yet. Although science has provided people with numerous benefits, some challenges still remain unsolved and cause troubles for people. For example, there has been an enormous progress in the medical science, and it has facilitated humans’ lives to a great extent. The introduction of various medicines and diagnosis methods has resulted in the possibility to cure most of the illnesses which were fatal to human’s life in the past. Moreover, the wide variety of new pieces of equipment have made it possible for doctors to operate high-risks surgeries, such as brain surgery, much more convenient. However, there are still some challenges that humans need to overcome. For instance, most of the cancers still have not a specific remedy, and many people lose their lives each year given to incurable cancers such as lung cancer. To increase the quality of people’s lives, these problems should be eliminated. Therefore, I think there are lots of improvements that have not been occurred yet, and science should be progress continuously in order to solve various difficulties.
The other reason that deserves to be mention is that although different discoveries have been occurred until now, many of them are still undiscovered due to the lack of techniques and equipment. Technology has had an indispensable effect on humans’ lives. By the advent of the technology, the path of discovering novel things have been soothed. For example, nowadays, thanks to the technology, we have wider insight about space and the world outside of the earth. As a result, lots of innovative inventions have become helpful to elevate the quality of the humans’ live. For example, lots of new satellites have provided people with this great opportunity to communicate with each other and have access to high-speed internet. However, there are lots of new goals that can be achieved by the help of technology, such as traveling and colonization on other planets, especially now that the Earth is suffering from pollution and different challenges. Therefore, there are still many improvements that can be happened in people’s live in order to improve their lives’ quality.
In conclusion, I believe that there are more significant improvements that need to be happened in humans’ lives by the helping hand of science and technology. Not only do lots of problems still remain, but also there are numerous new things to discover in order to improve the quality of people’s lives.
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- If you want to choose a purpose which one do you choose Helping other people Enhancing time management Improving physical well being and eating healthy food 73
- TPO 23 Integrated task 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In order to succeed in study or job the ability to adjust or adapt to changing conduction or circumstance is more important than having knowledge 73
- allocated budget on the activities 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'enormous progress'.
Suggestion: enormous progress
...for people. For example, there has been an enormous progress in the medical science, and it has faci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2820.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 534.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2808988764 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88717163937 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458801498127 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 881.1 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7951349015 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70833333333 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328678076472 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975831689483 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621412409875 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227133113269 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501043029441 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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