Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people argue that one should always remain truthful to other people in any relationship and they cite that telling truth prevent us from further lying to make things work. However, I disagree with their argument and believe that always telling truth is not the most important consideration in any relationship. I will support my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
First of all, sometime we need occasional lying to make our loved one feel happy and good about themselves, and these moments can make a significant change in their lives. For example, whenever my friend get upset because of his poor performance in the competitions, I always tell him that he played best game to his potential and he could have easily taken the lead, if not some basic unfortunate things have happened. If i don’t lie and simply tell the truth that opponent was way ahead of his game and he had no chance in front of his skills, he would have probably left the game. In some cases, not telling truth, actually help and inspire other person to further push their limits. If lying occasionally makes a person’s life better, I can’t agree that we should always tell the truth in our relationship.
Secondly, often time we are in awkward situations, and if we remain true to our self, it can even cost the relationship and the there will be occasion to tell truth. For instance, once, one of my brother’s coworker, casually ask him about how is she looking. Not knowing that it is her birthday today, he simply told her that the dress does not look good on her and she could have wore something other, in front of their colleagues. This cause her coworker to feel bad about herself, and eventually, she stopped talking to him. Knowing that telling truth will cause him his friendship, he would have simply said that she is looking very pretty. In many cases, it become an absolute necessity to “lie” in order to keep certain relationship. Thus, I think that it is not always important to tell truth in a relationship.
To conclude, it is very complex to decide whether one should always consider telling truth in a relationship. Some people argue that even if certain relationship does not work, a person should always stick to telling the truth. Nonetheless, I still contend that always telling truth is not the most important things in a relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, look, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in many cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80343980344 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66803995049 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6655956201 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.611111111 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252650097381 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10634519548 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105496580098 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203646624968 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117600565131 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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