Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays, by improvement of technology, people are getting busier and busier. There is no little doubt that being able to plan in such a situation plays a crucial role in people's lives, especially to youth who are more motivated population of each society and are always looking for making progress in their lives. In subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on this.
The most significant point to be mentioned is that, in the contemporary era, the number of vehicle has increased and traffic jam is everywhere in the big cities and young people who are usually trying to be on time for their work or classes in the university, need a precise planning for being on time. Unless, their job situation or educational opportunity is going to be in danger. My personal experience is a compelling example of this, two years ago when I started my job in a business company, I was told that the strictest rule of there is being on time and punctuation was boss's priority. Although, I could not be one time in the first week of the work due to the lack of planning and that caused me to lose my job very soon.
Another equally important fact is that in our modern lives, when social media can take our time, having the importance of timing and planning in mind is needed. There are many individuals who waste their time on throwing themselves in surfing the net or having chat in Facebook or Telegram and this addiction prevent them from taking serious steps in their lives toward making self-improvement. To shed light on this, let me come up with an example, once my sister wanted to register a sql-server class which could help her for finding job, but in that period of time, she had become too addicted to the online games that she totally forgot about the deadline and could not apply for that job until the next year. However, by considering an organized plan, she could have started her job a year sooner.
Finally but not less importantly, nowadays, with rapid pace of technology improvement, young people need to keep themselves up-dated by the latest information of their fields of study or working and this is going to make them busier than before and it is no secret that a practical and precise planning will path this way. Imagine when a 24 years old person is educating and working simultaneously, he would need also some hours a week for searching the latest news of his field of study. In this way, they will need to know how to manage their time.
All in all, technology improvement which has facilitated our lives from many aspects, has make us facing the need of planning and organizing more than any time else. In this critical period of time, young people need to know how to manage their time more than any time else. Since they are in danger of losing their time in traffic or wasting that on social media. In addition, they need to be always aware of the latest news of their field which make them busier than any time before.
- Independent writing TPO 51 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 73
- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationships 76
- Would you prefer interrupting the teachers and pointing out their mistakes or saying nothing 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d help her for finding job, but in that period of time, she had become too addicted to the onl...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...have started her job a year sooner. Finally but not less importantly, nowadays, wit...
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Line 9, column 184, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...re than any time else. In this critical period of time, young people need to know how to manag...
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Line 9, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... make them busier than any time before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2432.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62357414449 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53016041971 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498098859316 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6365332229 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.111111111 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113802790498 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388669404589 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033918520026 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690212828396 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182368749532 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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