With a shadow of a doubt, in the given hectic life, more and more people concern about high quality and comfortable life rhythm. A glance at people's attitude towards the ability to plan and organize brings to a light question that has been asked several times, namely, whether it is necessary or not to develop this kind of ability. Were I forced to choose, I would insist on having the ability and I will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is the ability to plan and organize can be wholesome to deal with problems and difficulties existing in work or study. The complex modern life rhythm has made our lives be full of mess, to illustrate more, we have to tackle some distinctive tasks simultaneously sometimes. However, with the ability to plan and organize, we can spilt those problems into smaller tasks that are easier to solve. In the same vein, according to our schedule, by assigning those tasks into different time periods, not only can we improve the work efficiency, but also receive the maximum profit of time utilization.
Another essential reason that I hold this opinion is because this ability can contribute to making our lives more comfortable. It is crystal clear that a well-organized schedule can leave us enough time to accomplish the goals that we want to accomplish. Take my friends Wendy as a compelling example. She was selected into an entertainment company at an early age, which means she had to devote most of her time to practicing singing and dancing skills. However, instead of using the rest of her time optionally, she made his daily plan in advance and allocated an acceptable amount of time into staying with her family, exploring different kinds of interests, and learning to be a broadcast. As a result, either she kept good mental health compared to other girls in the same company, or she succeed in the career transition from a singer to a broadcaster which she was dreaming of. Her example vividly demonstrates the advantages of having the ability to plan and organize.
A voice arises that there are too many trivial matters that may interrupt the daily plan and make it no longer effective. Admittedly, this phenomenon does exist, however, without the ability to plan and organize time and let it be interrupted at any time, it may form a vicious life cycle and eventually immerse us into an irreversible situation.
In conclusion, drawing upon the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly hold the opinion that people should have the ability to plan and organize, and I believe my opponents will yield upon after being shown to my article.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'spill'
Suggestion: spill
...he ability to plan and organize, we can spilt those problems into smaller tasks that ...
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Line 3, column 794, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'succeeds'.
Suggestion: succeeds
...other girls in the same company, or she succeed in the career transition from a singer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86696230599 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72125053928 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547671840355 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7163221135 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.117647059 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205085920789 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686533374896 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498965335912 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117138355781 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036337096507 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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