Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Life is changing in a rapid rhythm that we can not pursuit it, even the people's feelings towards the surroundings have differed. In my opinion, I believe that people today are less satisfied with their lives and in this essay I will demonstrate my reasons for that support.
First, people nowadays have to work hard for the majority of the day and every day. They work about 12 hours per day to make their living and gain experience qualifying them to the best. As a result, they can not enjoy their time doing activities they love or spending too much time with their beloved ones. All these stressful situations rip them off happiness and satisfaction. From my personal experience, I work as a radiologist in a hospital and I go to my work at 7 a.m passing through difficult and exhausting work hours in the hospital and then return home at 6 p.m very tired. I do not have time or even ability to go out with my kids or even try to read a book as I have to finish my house work. All these factors prevent me from relishing anything in my life. In the past decades, people, in contrast, were working for less hours and doing less work as the life was simple.
Secondly, because of the development we see around us and the invention of many devices and machines that facilitate people's lives, they are always seeking for more and became unsatisfied with what they already have. For instance, people now are collectors for any thing new and modern, they do not appreciate what they possess and need to buy more and more things, this makes them always sad and unsatisfied. In the past, the resources were limited and people had less options to choose from, so they did not feel insufficiency and lived in peace.
Lastly, not only the technological development that increased, also the disease rates have elevated too as a price for the civilization. Chronic diseases like hypertension, diabetes and cancer are now considered this era's disorders. Besides, infectious diseases caused by viruses and bacteria spread as well, which deprived them from their inner peace and their ability to savor life.
In the summary, every thing is different now and the people changed too because of development and the stressful events happening around them in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun options is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74873096447 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59902071081 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5423867605 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.058823529 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231770804051 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755148267858 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695546885283 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138055186068 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645400800348 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.