Ti is a highly debated issue of whether or not the people now are less happy or less satisfied with their life than the people in the past. Deeply deliberating to the point; Personally, I believe that people nowadays are happier and satisfied than the people in the past. And there are several reasons for that.
First, people now are more comfortable because of the massive inventions. For example, there are a huge number of appliances did not find in the past and all of these machines make our life more facile. Controversially, a long time ago, when I was little, my Mom was working, but she did not have enough time to take care of my brothers and me and did alot of stuff in our house, so she left her job. But now everyone can do both because of the presence of such machines make our life easy.
Second, people now are more enjoyable because of the discovery of the cell phone. For instance, when someone is boring, he could watch a hundred movies without neede to go out and save his money and time. While in the past, the person had to go to the cinema to see not more than the actual number of his finger and wast time. Another thing we should take into consideration, they are a shocking number of entertainments on the smartphone.
As a conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I firmly conclude that people at present are happier than the people in the past because of there life is more accessible and fun.
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Essay evaluation report
there are a huge number of appliances did not find in the past
a huge number of appliances did not find in the past
because of the presence of such machines make our life easy.
because the presence of such machines makes our life easy.
because of the presence of such machines which makes our life easy.
Sentence: For instance, when someone is boring, he could watch a hundred movies without neede to go out and save his money and time.
Error: neede Suggestion: need
Sentence: While in the past, the person had to go to the cinema to see not more than the actual number of his finger and wast time.
Error: wast Suggestion: No alternate word
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flaws:
No. of Words: 263 350
need to put more content. and better to put three reasons.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1139 1500
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.331 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.393 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.151 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.594 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Ti is a highly debated issue of whether or not the people now are less happy or less s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the massive inventions. For example, there are a huge number of appliances di...
^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thing we should take into consideration, they are a shocking number of entertainm...
^^
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... there life is more accessible and fun.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, another thing, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46768060837 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49769081863 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.934704947 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287686472956 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1079175337 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128970098735 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186004292559 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137392698689 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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