Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is obvious that in this hectic world people are not able to be happier and live healthier rather than before. I believe that people now are less happy and not satisfy their lifestyle. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, when people are feeling to be prone to some external elements around them, they are not able to be happy and release their minds of stressful things. This might be caused by some serious problems in each life naturally. Furthermore, the world we live in full of people who are fighting to rattan a high quality of life. My father is a compelling example of this to demonstrate how much tension he tolerated. When I was a child, my father worked 10 hours a day to gain more money. first, He felt happy but after a while, he found out he is not close to his family and money could not be everything. Consequently, the impact of his behavior revealed in our life and makes him a depressed person but full of money.
Secondly, from a cultural perspective, it is to demand all people to work hard and it seems a culture for everyone to work hard even from an elderly age to demonstrate their families their high abilities. Thus, public telecommunications have to raise the awareness of people, especially the families about this issue. For example, our neighbor forced their children to work every summer to make them independent people to be powerful for their future. They were oblivious of the consequences that maybe happened for the children in the future. Besides, they were round of them, although they could see how much these children getting exhausted. When they grow up, they are not happy and nothing makes them happy. Hence, these are the effect of work indiscriminately.
As a result, by changing the world people are less happy due to their problems and the high work pressure. This is because some factors are compelling people to work hard. After all, they need to have easy access to the proper facilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 496, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...rked 10 hours a day to gain more money. first, He felt happy but after a while, he fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, after all, for example, i feel, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68079096045 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62519369365 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7942383632 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.85 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196880433803 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639108422567 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834750921405 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146883237582 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068075391921 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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