Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the current era, the rapid rate of world change is undeniable and everything develops with a high rhythm. However, some people believe the recent generation has less sense of satisfaction and happiness rather than the previous descendant due to the speedy world revolution, others believe otherwise and think the world alteration affected individuals’ lives positively. I firmly concur with the latter group for two main reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that humans always look for a more convenient and cheerful life. Nowadays, the development of science and technology makes life easier and more appropriate for people and with high-tech devices, they can do their tasks quickly with less physical pressure compared to their past. For instance, in the past, individuals had to wash their dishes and clothes by hand. It’s obvious that these works took a great deal of time and energies to be done in the past. But, in this advanced world with new inventions, all these kinds of tasks can be done with the help of the dishwasher and the washing machine in a quick time. Consequently, people can save much time and deposit their time into whatever they want and it leads to a more content feeling. Therefore, not only is life more comfortable in this modern world, but also people have many opportunities to make a fresh life for themselves by means of new devices which are in their access.
Another reason for this view is that the world changes people are facing increase their life quality in many aspects especially in health issues. The medical and psychological progression, leading to the better mental and physical health of any individual. Thanks to medical advancement, many diseases that might have killed numerous people in the past or changed their life drastically can be easily cured or even prevented. As a matter of fact, improvements in medical and psychological fields have a significant role in diagnosing diseases and finding treatment in the shortest time. Using artificial intelligence for identifying different species of Covid is a good example of utilizing modern technologies in medical science which led to finding effective vaccines and consequently saving lives.
By taking into account all the above reasons, I believe that high-paced promotions in the world can have advantages like facilitating life and improving the overall life quality which brings people a more pleasant and joyful life compared to their ancestors.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18491484185 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80885253431 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559610705596 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7836221484 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.1875 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248126426169 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790410742824 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588192376215 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141997615045 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617226885692 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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