Do you agree or disagree with this following statement the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guideUse specific reason and example to support your answer

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...st delightful activities that people do,  it is also strongly recommended by psych...
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...from depression and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to tur...
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...sion and increasing longevity  as result ,each individual desire to turn traveling...
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...dividual desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience ...
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... desire to turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , person...
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... turn traveling into a  better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i ten...
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... better  and more  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group w...
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...ore  beneficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other...
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...ficial experience , personally i tend to  be with a group wherease other may hold ...
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...up wherease other may hold opposite view .in the following paragraphs i will advoc...
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...osite view .in the following paragraphs i will advocate my view for.  some reaso...
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...will advocate my view for.  some reason . Taking trip accompanied a professional...
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...g trip accompanied a professional one in  traveling is more instructive. Most of...
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...and observe tourisms attraction wherease ,almost   know nothing about the history ...
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...rve tourisms attraction wherease ,almost   know nothing about the history behind th...
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...ow nothing about the history behind them ,but tour leader usually have broad infor...
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...y have broad information about buildings  architecture , people who used to live t...
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...nformation about buildings  architecture , people who used to live there , but the...
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...itecture , people who used to live there , but their knowledge is not limited to i...
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...but their knowledge is not limited to it ,they are familiar with customs and ritua...
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...nd rituals belonging to a certain region  therefore tourists not only recognize th...
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... be able to communicate with inhabitants  .in addition ,tasing new  foods, which a...
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...be able to communicate with inhabitants  .in addition ,tasing new  foods, which ar...
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...mmunicate with inhabitants  .in addition ,tasing new  foods, which are made just i...
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...th inhabitants  .in addition ,tasing new  foods, which are made just in a specific...
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...ecific area, is one of the most exciting  part of traveling ,unfortunately most of...
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... of the most exciting  part of traveling ,unfortunately most of people have no ide...
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...iting  part of traveling ,unfortunately most of people have no idea where they can serve the b...
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...o idea where they can serve the best one .but tour guider take groups  memeber in ...
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...he best one .but tour guider take groups  memeber in a right place. Second,travel...
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...roups  memeber in a right place. Second,traveling on tour is more arranged, tours usually...
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...r is more arranged, tours usually create  a schedule beforehand and appointe a per...
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...our leader to guide groups based on that .tour leader s acquaintance about a cert...
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...ader to guide groups based on that .tour leader s acquaintance about a certain pl...
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...der s acquaintance about a certain place lead to groups member wont miss  visiti...
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...uaintance about a certain place lead to groups member wont miss  visiting any of...
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... place lead to groups member wont miss  visiting any of attraction even ones whi...
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...ttraction even ones which are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners m...
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...ich are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most...
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...h are not famous . As it was mentioned , tours planners manage time in the most a...
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...e in the most appropriate possible form , even the time of eating meals is deci...
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...le form , even the time of eating meals is decided in advance .so participants w...
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... of eating meals is decided in advance .so participants will have minimum wasted...
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...nimum wasted time and maximum efficiency . Third ,Appointing tour leaders in h...
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...m wasted time and maximum efficiency . Third ,Appointing tour leaders in histor...
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... time and maximum efficiency . Third ,Appointing tour leaders in historical bu...
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...ing tour leaders in historical buildings creats more jobs position , also if a ...
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...cal buildings creats more jobs position , also if a country purposes to make mo...
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...ldings creats more jobs position , also if a country purposes to make money from...
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...money from tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe...
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... tourism and transforms it to a industry it would be better to employe some exper...
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...gh to introduce the countrys attractions ,and encourage people to opt their countr...
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...their travels destination. Consequently ,i put in proposal that both people and g...
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...overnments have to pay more attention to getting help from tour leader, specially...
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...p from tour leader, specially government should persuade students to follow it a...
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...our leader, specially government should persuade students to follow it academicl...
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...ersuade students to follow it academicly .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27807486631 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95655389559 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633689839572 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.181645845 48.9658058833 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.0 100.406767564 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4285714286 20.6045352989 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.45110844103 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 5.5376344086 1083% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155289405383 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699987847677 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331116713321 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646782284776 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292947963864 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 11.7677419355 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.