Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it goes without saying that in today’s progressive world, every individual is looking for a way to enjoy his or her life despite the unforgiving economic pressure that exists. traveling as one the most conspicuous ways of relieving stress is an avenue provided to a majority of people to enjoy their life. one main paradox which remained unresolved among people is whether to travel in a group led by a tour guide or travel by themselves. Personally speaking, I hold the opinion that taking a trip by a tour is more beneficial and the reasons to substantiate my point of view are presented in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that people consider traveling as one of the most pleasurable tasks and experience one can gain in his or her life. In this line of thought, it is believed by many people that traveling by a group of people which is led by a tour guide is more economical than traveling by one’s own. since the tour provides people not only the food but also the accommodation to be used during the trip, it will cost people only a small amount of budget. As long as the tour has to accommodate a substantiate number of people, the hotel and the restaurant give a considerable discount to the tour leader and which in turn will make the price of traveling with a tour lower than traveling alone. To put it in a vivid picture, last month my friend and I decided to take a trip to Turkey. since we did not know anything about a particular and an efficient tour, we decided to go by ourselves. Unbelievably, it costs us twice as much the price of traveling by a tour because neither did we receive any discount nor did we know which hotel and restaurant was cheaper. The economical aspect of traveling by a tour is certainly the most beneficial part for people who want to take a trip.
Furthermore, it is no secret to anyone that when a group of people either familiar to one another or total strangers decide to travel with a tour, avenues of wider communication will be open. To put it in other words, tours are a great source in which people can get to know each other because diverse assortments of people gather together and they have one major goal of having fun during the trip. under such a circumstance, starting a new relationship is not surprising because people spend a specific amount of time together and this can spark the beginning of a long lasting friendship. For instance, five years ago I took a ten-day-trip to France with a wonderful tour under the name of “Sky tour”. I was traveling alone and wished to make a friend in order to spend these ten days together. during the flight I was sitting next to a very handsome man and we started talking and one thing led to another and we fell in love with each other. If it was not for this travel with the tour, I would have never seen my soul mate.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons into account, I firmly believe that traveling with a group led by a guide is more preferable since it is economical and help people to find friends and expand the scope of their communication. is there anyone who wants to deprive himself from this joy?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 574.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5574912892 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72781134394 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466898954704 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 840.6 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8890641102 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.571428571 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191919687908 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642182107229 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438988910883 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130435549933 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176933883341 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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