Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, No one can cast doubt on the fact that group traveling and organization thereof has paramount significance in the people life; group surfing is quite becoming trendy among travelers.
It is my empathetic belief that the most efficient and the best way is a tour guide journey; If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my points of view, I would strongly suggest that the lower cost of such travel and the most comfortable option to travel whereby a person can travel by herself or himself.
I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is without an adumbration of doubts that in these days, the cost and expenditure of traveling alone are much higher than the group surfing; being a seemingly cheapest option to travel notwithstanding, the cost of such travel-individual traveler- is very high, and it is costly, unfortunately; My personal experience is a shred of compelling evidence for what I mean; I used to buy a ticket for the flight to India about 100 dollars, so I would see the same ticket in charter flight was 80 dollar; not only the flight prize for a person was not cheap, but also the group surfing is much economical than travel by self.
It also goes without declaring that travel agencies provide places, tour facilities, and equipment in advance; hence, the people do not worry and apprehension about providing travel material at all; the person makes a payment earlier, thereby comforting during travel time. To be more specific, when I was traveling in South Asia, I found a travel agency to help me concerning all of the areas tour, road map, places name where I want to see, and the other materials that no one can provide by themselves.
It can be summed up in accentuating that the best way to surfing is in an organization led by a tour leader.
I think it is better to travel by means of these group's leader; they have great experience in traveling, whereby people can travel more easily, and in an efficient manner. Travel agency plays a vital role in the world-wide travel system. Nonetheless, people would like to travel by themselves, such a coach surfing and backpacking traveler recently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'seemingly the cheapest'.
Suggestion: seemingly the cheapest
... higher than the group surfing; being a seemingly cheapest option to travel notwithstanding, the c...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...he same ticket in charter flight was 80 dollar; not only the flight prize for a person...
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Line 8, column 367, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to concern' or 'concern'.
Suggestion: to concern; concern
...sia, I found a travel agency to help me concerning all of the areas tour, road map, places...
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Line 8, column 378, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...d a travel agency to help me concerning all of the areas tour, road map, places name where...
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Line 12, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...t is better to travel by means of these groups leader; they have great experience in t...
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Line 12, column 149, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...reby people can travel more easily, and in an efficient manner. Travel agency plays a vital role in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nonetheless, so, as to, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83466666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83557589683 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.106379508 48.9658058833 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.3 100.406767564 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 20.6045352989 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197153023562 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873759346468 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318699318063 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101181776663 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033255243255 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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