With the development of people’s living standard, quite a large number of people are facing a hot topic whether spending time alone is the best way to totally relax. Compared with enjoying ourselves alone, other forms of relaxation definitely play a key role in our daily life. From my perspective, spending time with families, traveling with friends and even actively participate in social activities are more likely to create values in easy life.
When it comes to getting together with families, not surprisingly, it is an effective way for us to release the pressure. It is quite easy for us to start a topic with our families both about things that make us happy and about troubles that lead to depression. That is to say, sharing happiness with families enables us to win double happiness. After they feel the happy moment, it is common that they will recall their cheerful things in their life or in the workplace and share with us. In addition, not only will communicating with families bring us the happy moment, but just watching television with them or having meals together undeniably makes us leave the unpleasant things behind, thus relieving the stress.
Moreover, despite the way to stay with families, traveling with friends is conductive to relaxing. Friends, obviously, bring us a lot of happiness because we are familiar with each other and know what we like and what we are worried about. Traveling with friends can get away from the daily grind and appreciate the beautiful scenery and capture the memorable moment with the camera, which ultimately enables us to immerse in the pleasant mood. Evidence suggests that the more time we stay with friends, the more happiness we will obtain because peers have the common topic or always like to share the latest information. Thus, this can enrich our daily life and making us be in the state of satisfaction.
Finally, one radical proposal to relax is to take part in social activities. If we always join some outdoor or indoor activities, we can not only enjoy the process of meeting new friends, but also can enjoy the relaxing and pleasant atmosphere for communication and exchange. At the same time, there is no doubt that activities or parties apparently involve so many special designed games that players eventually enjoy great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. Nevertheless, spending time alone means that no one can have a cause communication with and even no friends around to play together. If facing obstacles and suffering from stress, hardly do we confide annoyance with others or finding out fun activities to relieve the stress.
In conclusion, although sometimes to keep ourselves alone may enjoy a piece of peace, I actually maintain that having time with families, friends and even strangers in parties actually contributes to relaxing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ment of people’s living standard, quite a large number of people are facing a hot topic whether s...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'communicate'
Suggestion: communicate
...are with us. In addition, not only will communicating with families bring us the happy moment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, finally, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06595744681 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68753725484 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517021276596 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7307735822 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.315789474 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7368421053 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159857280112 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578027732206 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431290805543 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10024398154 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459273631324 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.