On the grounds that people rencently have to deal with significant workload, they want to find ways to loosen up. It is argued that spending time alone is the most effective way to truly release stress. However, it seems to me that being alone after exhausted time is not always effectively reduce depression in light that individuals can find their best ways to relax and these ways are different among people.
To begin with, there are numerous ways to reduce stress that people can choose depend on their deposition. An introvert may find they are in comfort zone while doing their hobbies alone such us reading comic books, cycling or going to cinema and enjoy sweet popcorn by themselves. A sociable person may keen on chatting with friends on the Internet and engaging excursions with family are the best way to relax after a week up to ears at work.
Additionally, individuals can also relax with the way is suitable in their status. As a typical example, a luxury bag can please the wealthy but that does not mean a person can not afford expensive accessories also can not find way to loosen up. There are variety of activities people can do to relax without paying a large amount of money. Go running in early morning or cooking for family may bring people the happiness in a different way compared to dinning at costly place but all of these can help people feel release.
In conclusion, I am convinced that there is no best way to relax to all people. Each individual have his own effective activity to reduce depression according to many factors such as deposition and status.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to depend'
Suggestion: to depend
...to reduce stress that people can choose depend on their deposition. An introvert may f...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...r family may bring people the happiness in a different way compared to dinning at costly place but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73476702509 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48885957071 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3513741086 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219711657503 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096773395859 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674736680636 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144686739936 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663132174768 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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