Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Give specific examples.
The growth and development of the individual depend on the career of his or her interest. In today's developing world a job is the most important thing to survive in the competition. Some say that achieving a job is easier than securing a job for a longer period.
But, factors like guarantee attenuate competition environment hence I mostly disagree with the above prompt for the following three reasons.
Firstly, in today's fastest-growing world securing a job for a long time is difficult. But, hiring the employee permanently will assure his or her position and eventually decrease the competition. Hardworking, feasibility, wit does not hold the water
when a guarantee is given to the employee and the employee becomes languid. I would like to share one of the examples that my elder brother who was recently passed out got a job in an international company. After some period he becomes a permanent employee there and later on
he turn lethargic in his performance because of the assurance of a job.
Secondly, if an employer hires employees temporarily there is always an opportunity for other people to showcase their eligibility. The process of the dynamic job market will not hobble and more people get a chance. Moreover, the productivity,
feasibility of the company will augment as new mindset come up with novel ideas. Changes in the job market will be conducive to the growth and development of every individual. young people will get more experience of working in different companies, and their perspective looking at the world, solving problems will upgrade.
However, because of temporary employment, there will be a flux and dynamic change which can be mitigated by the intelligence of young minds. The environment of the competition will create innovations and opportunities.
In totality, businesses should not hire employees permanently which hobble the progress of other people a few years down the line.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on the turn'?
Suggestion: on the turn
...es a permanent employee there and later on he turn lethargic in his performance because of...
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Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'turns'.
Suggestion: turns
...rmanent employee there and later on he turn lethargic in his performance because of...
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Line 8, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Young
...th and development of every individual. young people will get more experience of work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19169329073 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05663486019 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3718312642 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146004095208 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431278959333 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474103323476 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636177920651 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049935569388 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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