No one can cast a shadow of doubt over the important role that money plays in human’s life. Most people desire to earn a lot of money, because they want to live comfortable and be able to supply their family’s necessities. Some individuals believe the more money they earn, the happier they will be. Thus, individuals as owners of companies attempt to increase their profit in some ways. I believe this is not a good idea if they do anything to increase the profit, because on one hand, it might neglect morality, and on the other hand, it might decrease the number of buyers. In the following paragraphs I will elaborate my reasons and bring some examples to shed light on my point of view.
One of the most important reasons why doing everything to enhance profit is not right is that morality may not be considered. Some companies may do anything to create wealth without thinking about consumers, which might not be ethically right. For instance, the owners of some pharmaceutical companies only think about how they can increase their profit. They do everything, either legal or illegal, to reach their desired profit. They may neglect morality and ethical principles by producing medicines and releasing them without doing sufficient pharmaceutical tests or providing real results to the FDA in order to get the approval sooner. This may result in side effects in patients and threatening their health.
The other equally important reason why doing everything to increase profit is not right is that it may backfire. If a company increases prices for its products, not only profit might not be enhanced, but also the number of buyers may decrease. For instance, Banana Republic is a popular store which has products with higher prices than Gap. Commonly, many people cannot afford the prices in Banana Republic, but when store administrator puts a large discount on their products, a lot of people decide to enter the store and buy their favorite products. As another example, Hugo BOSS has lower number of customers than Banana Republic due to the higher prices. Therefore, increasing the price of products might not always bring profit for the producer.
It is indisputable that sales managers can do some tricks to increase profit which may sometimes be associated with good and positive results. They can produce a second line of products which is related to the first product. For instance, a company that sales printers and scanners can also produce computer monitors. The consumer who comes to buy a computer monitor may decide to buy a printer as well.
To sum up, in spite of the advantage that is mentioned in the last paragraph, the cons outweigh the pros. Balance should be considered in everything. According to the aforementioned reasons, we can safely reach to the conclusion that doing everything in order to obtain more profit without considering the morality and the consumer’s budget is not a good idea at all.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: New_stu
Essay Categories
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 9.8082437276 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97165991903 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68623405508 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483805668016 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0556278394 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.24 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.76 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204668883092 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603209978343 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496948921835 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117768448138 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367057926663 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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