do you agree or disagree with the following statement: childhood is the happiest time of a person's life
In general, we sometimes pass in different situations in whole the life which maybe have good or bad effect in our impression toward life .one of these arguments is our sweet days in the beginning of our lives .I believe that ,and l feel this way in two mainly important reasons, which I am going to explore and discuss in the following two essays .
The first point I want to talk about is that childhood is the home of happiness and good. Actually , we may be weed out that we have all our happiness this the previous simple toys we maintain them right now .In addition that kids be innocent . They perhaps play with any animal without feeling failure .
when I was ten , I use to play with a big cow and a little horse in the the farm of my grandpa . I remember what I felt like that I wanted to stay there forever.
The second point I want to highlight is that infancy has no stress, has no drawbacks, has no responsibilities, children just eat what they want and play with any tools they see.
My own experience is a compelling example of this. For instance, once youth get twenty years old they directly have a type of self dependence.
They realize that they have to wage the fire of business in their life to have an independent life aim. This will result that all people feel repression, as their memories of infancy remain them how they were comfortable and peaceful.
To sum up, I strongly believe that being a child is the in whole life. I think that because infancy is the period that has peace of mind .We can know the meaning of happiness in this sweet period at all. Do not forget your days in the very beginning of your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41787997496 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4037866603 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0907724852649 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314741036528 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311127024354 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394469951318 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02209803585 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.