I strongly agree that classmates are more influential to a child's success at school than parents. This I support with the following reasons.A child spends so much time with his classmates at school. They study together,play together, and write exams together. Psychologists agree that during their first years at school, children are more influenced by their classmates on their motional and mental growth.In addition, a child has nothing to hide with his classmates in terms of academic performance . For instance, a child who does a bad job in a math exam will be revealed on his grades; a child who wins the first prize in oral debate contest will be rewarded before the whole group of students. So his classmates know both his good and bad sides.
However, It is easier for a child to conceal something to his parents while describing his conduct at school often limit to those good points. Finally, classmates are of similar age with a child. They share so many interests in common. So a child is more attracted by his classmates' activities. If he is in a group of children who are interested in creative activities, he will more likely to think of inventing something. So classmates are very helpful in a child's
success at school.
From the above discussed, I agree that classmates will influence a child more in
his success because they spend more time together, they understand him better
than his parents, and they have so much common interests together.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236363636364 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.127272727273 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105454545455 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0654545454545 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0909090909091 0.0685040099705 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.149090909091 0.118717715034 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0181818181818 0.0351676179071 52% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76710968341 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0218181818182 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0727272727273 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0145454545455 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109090909091 0.0139019557991 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1474.0 2387.08602151 62% => OK
No of words: 250.0 408.028673835 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.896 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.48200974243 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148 0.112833075102 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76710968341 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 51.017012798 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2307692308 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4735100333 48.84282405 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 46.0307692308 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.42307692308 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329542767406 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0830856729039 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0574810659463 0.0752933317313 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532722994654 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.255988946372 0.151897553556 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137251648577 0.114077575197 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776204198717 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.20832323227 0.336927656856 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.131517665012 0.067059652881 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17763142447 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961044270848 0.0618886996521 155% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.