Children sometimes prefer to follow attitudes from others like classmates or teachers more than their parents. This could be a serious problem, however, this statement could be part of the way parents educate their children, In my view, there is no influence impacting a group of kids whether these have good principles in order to have good behavior. Although, in many cases, this theory, unfortunately, do not apply. A possible reason is the lack of principles and the attention more of these kids are demanding on their parents.
First of all, kids sometimes have the necessity to enter in a specific group with the same age with other classmates. There is always a leader in those groups. Someone who mostly create rules and give instructions to other kids in order to be an important boss or leader. As an example, we can state now, how many kids in school determinate who is more valuable and create some criteria, in the majority of the cases, bad to build a right way.
Secondly, the shape of parents to many kids would become conservative and incomprehensive to their ideas or decisions by the leaders. Additionally, these criteria could bring common problems, for the reason that these children can break the rules easily. On the other hand, if parents try to inspect or watch carefully the behavior of their kids, they could realize early what is happening, and also could prevent negative results.
Additionally, we are living a very difficult society, in the majority of the cases divided, and the best way to improve the harmony between the relationship parents and kids is talking to them in an effective way, in order to have good results.
Concluding these comments, we can imagine how long the current society is growing and the behavior of most of the individuals who perform it, the best attitude that parents must have with their children is to build a strong communication and talk about everything is happening outside, in order to create confidence between them.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 70
- Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem.However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. 67
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 73
- Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem.However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. 67
- Illiteracy has traditionally been viewed as largely a third world problem.However it is becoming apparent that in countries such as the USA and Australia, illiteracy is on the increase. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hip parents and kids is talking to them in an effective way, in order to have good results. Conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, in many cases, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95535714286 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71665877623 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532738095238 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3812455682 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116554410128 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436008185536 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309939584146 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587194950569 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360351612232 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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