Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Although classmates would have a little influence on a child's success in school. However, the influence that parents would actually impose are much more considerable. The basis of my view are based on several reasons.
First of all, normally parents do follow up with their children at home. Children usually have homework and preparations that they should accomplish at home after they are done from school . At this point, parents usually could realize any drawbacks that could affect their children's success at school. For example; if a child suddenly would start to procrastinate doing his ho...
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