No one can deny that there are both the positive and negative aspects of the statement entitled "People who live in rural areas can take better care of their families as compared to people who live in urban areas". If I were forced to choose, I would definitely said that bucolic individual can fend their parents much more as respect to modest world people. It is my firm belief about the village human-kind due to number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, bucolic people get the chance to stay with their family from years. There are mostly joint family and having two to three generation living together. Whenever there is festival in the house, everyone get their contribution in doing the work. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, when I am in my grandparents place, I get the opportunity to meet with my cousins, my uncle-aunt. They always seems so happy by surviving at same location, if anyone had gone town, they would have packed so much of food, sweets to them. So, that they cannot miss anyone of them and each of them have given a gift as a token of love and blessing to that kid. I want to conclude this by saying, urban humans can't understand this because they never know the love of being togetherness.
Secondly, due to urbanization people are in the race of achieving success, job, career and forget to give the time for their parents. For gaining the profit in life, they are capable of living without their elders, family etc. They never realize the flavor of boon of loving parents. They are just stuck in crowd of running people, who are money-minded, greedy and think to become prosperous and rich. Drawing from my own incidents, I would like to say that I am living as a tenant in a house where an old lady lived. One day, she got ill and no-one was there for her. She lied with their children that she was fine, nothing serious because she didn't wanted to bother them. When I had asked, why she do that? She said, they are very busy people, I have to die one day, everyone have to die, it's destiny. So, why should I disturb their normal schedule. At last, I realized parents love is incomparable, no-one can replace them.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that "the more we stay together, the more we care for each other". In any relationship, bond of love and care becomes mettle with time. Therefore, parents are the only precious gift giving by god to us while living with them, you can achieve the blessing of their power.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...re forced to choose, I would definitely said that bucolic individual can fend their ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...vidual can fend their parents much more as respect to modest world people. It is m...
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
... my cousins, my uncle-aunt. They always seems so happy by surviving at same location,...
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Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o conclude this by saying, urban humans cant understand this because they never know...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er know the love of being togetherness. Secondly, due to urbanization people are...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... just stuck in crowd of running people, who are money-minded, greedy and think to becom...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e was fine, nothing serious because she didnt wanted to bother them. When I had asked...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... bother them. When I had asked, why she do that? She said, they are very busy peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59872611465 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46580647777 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552016985138 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4225113355 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.64 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.84 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274214192604 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646137564217 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987171225749 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180714200474 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100622349137 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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