Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture
Since the beginning of civilization people have been practicing various moves in order to receive good conditions and luck from supreme powers. An opinion exists that hop plays a crucial part in the world cultures on our planet. I completely agree to the statement mentioned higher due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
First of all, humanity used dancing as the way of self-expression, as particular moves formed the humans’ perception of others. In ancient societies, people wanted to impress mankind by showing their original dance, that is why they received approval and grew in social ladder. Furthermore, dancing was the main part of religious events, such as appeasement of the gods or call for the fortune in all undertakings. For example, according to the “History of Babaluca island”, written by Carl Johnson, dancing was the most essential event in tribe life, as they were celebrating the success and made presents for their favorite gods. In other words, hop is really important for mankind as it allow people to show themselves and complete the religious ceremony.
Secondly, dancing is an excellent way of physical activity in a modern world, as it is available for everyone. Amateur hop does not require special equipment, as the all movements can be done without it simple and harmless. Moreover, dancing contributes to the production of happiness hormones, that I why people receive positive ideas and ready to work more productively. For example, according to the Mikes’ Torenos’ “World without movements” research, 50% of experiment members, who spend 1 hour per day dancing, showed the decrease in the risk of heart attack about 15%. Hence, hop is good for humans well-being as it solve the problem of physical inactivity and form a modern healthy culture.
In conclusion I would like to say that Dancing is really crucial for mankind as it bears plenty of benefits for human beings. It helps people to escape various motor problems and shows the loyalty to the gods and others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8307779225 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604863221884 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2741197079 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.933333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101699953087 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366185650153 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424056575242 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645607718908 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404513291009 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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