WE live in the 21st century, wich we can call the informational age,but unfortunately children still today cannot use this technology for their own benefit. I believe that online games affect the psyche of children and take the time,that they could use for reading interesting literature.So I strongly agree with this opinion that today educated children is more difficult than it was in the past. I will try to explainin detail why I think so,and give some examples too.
First of all it is obviously that children spend a lot of time at the computers or using their cell phone and at this time they forget one of a good latin proverb ''carpe diem'' catch the day! They waste their time,they have no time for literature , actually they are computer addicts and cannot think about anything else. How to solve this problem?
Initiality chidren from early childhood need to be taught to allocate their time, accustom to easy work or reading an interesting literature,this everything is very important for educated generation.
Secondly if we look from the other side and teach children to use the high technology for their own benefit and not just for computer games or social net works situation will radically change.
And in conclusion I really hope that psychologists, parents and teachers together can make the right desicion and teach children to love time and use technology correctly, without harming themselves and benefit from this "miracle"that our Era has given us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93006821686 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640816326531 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.095331247 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 100.406767564 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.125 5.45110844103 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226895802652 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909018882218 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984996857386 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107903596132 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842073813902 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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