Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples.
In modern times, societies have been in the state of flux and far away from what they used to be. Families, known as fundamental blocks of each society, are not exception, and they seem different in some aspects. One important variation is the weight which people give to family size. Some people if asked would agree with the statement that the number of family members does not matter anymore, however, this idea has its opponent. As far as I am concerned, large families are still preferable. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
To begin with, no matter how much societies change...
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Hi, can you tell me what was
Hi, can you tell me what was the main weakness of my essay? Because my exam date is approcing and I really want to improve.
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Hi, can you tell me what was
Hi, can you tell me what was the main weakness of my essay? Because my exam date is approcing and I really want to improve as mich as I can.
Thanks
You are getting better once
You are getting better once you could remove those grammatical issues or spelling errors.
You have good language and good ideas. The content is organized well and developed smoothly.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 473 350
No. of Characters: 2227 1500
No. of Different Words: 251 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.664 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.708 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.522 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.565 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.89 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5