Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Kinship has tremendous leverage on ourr quotidain routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate their presents because of their indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the view point that relatives still play a pivotal and beneficial role in our life. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception and actual life observation which has led me to agree with idea that our family and relatives have tenuous impact in the contemporary life than in the past. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, wide distance that separate us from our family's root, reduce their importance role in our life.To be more specific.Today,many of individuals travel to other countries seeking for new life, job opportunities, or educational experience. All these are factors that shape relations with our family. For instance, I went to the USA for study, because my school tuition and courses program provides me no time to spend in calling my guardians, grandparents. This effects negatively on my relation with them and reduce their rule in my life.On contrast, in the past , becauseamost all my family members tin our counties. This make it possible to continue attending family meetings every weekend and strength the connections.
In addition, life difficulties occupied our time. Fall time jobs, financial responsibility, and so on effects our relation with extended family. Our contemporary society put plethora of problems on our shoulders. Furthermore, many of our jobs needs us to finish even after we back home. This effect our leisure, communication, and family relations.For example, many people trying to buy their own house, pay their kids finnace anf fullfil their dreams.Many of us work at weekend too besides full- time job to gets all our requiremnet. Definitely, one of the most withdrawal impact, is our relation with own family. In view of the fact that in the past, the life was much simple and people requirement can be easily provide, thats why, they keeps a stable and strong family relation.
To sum up, after contemplating all reasons which I mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, IO would reinforce my idea that our relation with extended family reduced catastrophicly because of seperated distance which keeps us a part and burden life that leave us no time to communicate with them.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- the extended family is less important now than in the pass. 76
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to 61
- Agree or disagree/tradition should be followed without taking care of individual prefernce 78
- Is the fast decision is the key feature in leader person and taking very haste decision 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17910447761 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94595394675 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587064676617 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6429731882 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108613350978 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349447307678 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314940300544 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762015649063 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171899733587 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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