Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Submitted by bitessa on Fri, 05/04/2018 - 13:56

The internet is the great invention in technology and almost all the nation rely on it at work and at home.
Internet has made the life way easier than before and get the world like small town. Some people believe that the internet has so much information and access to it create problems. Others disagree. In my opinion, the internet has valuable information that they are beneficial for people. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, internet help people to be more knowledge than before because in the past there were limited learning resources such as books or television and radio, but now they have the Web which is a miracle for learning. Everybody search for the topic that he is unfamiliar with and get clear direct details by using the computer. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year I was pregnant with my baby son and I had a healthy problem. At the second trimester of the pregnancy I did Ultra sound to see the baby growth and his gender and the genetic. He was a boy and I was so happy. Unfortunately, he had a problem which was a white spot in the heart and that indicated a disease called Down syndrome with 1%. I was terrifying and I had no idea about that concept, but when I got home I googled it on the internet and got a lot of information that helped me to know that many pregnant women had the same problem and finally got a healthy baby.

Secondly, nowadays people get shopping in the internet more that in the store which is more easy. Some people are busy and work full time job, so they do not have time to do shopping at the stores, instead, they do it online. Moreover, online shopping has many different choices that you can see and select the suitable one. For example, some shopper do not get their cloth size at the store, but they find it easily online. In addition, these variety of online shopping has a wide range of different price such as Amazon, many people shop there since their product are affordable and reasonable price.

To sum up, I strongly believe that the internet has so much valuable information. This is because people can get familiar with unclear topic by just searching it on the computer, and because people do shopping online more than going to the store which is more convenient.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Independent TOEFL Writing

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ore easy. Some people are busy and work full time job, so they do not have time to do sho...
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Line 6, column 257, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t online. Moreover, online shopping has many different choices that you can see and select the...
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Line 6, column 439, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this variety' or 'these varieties'?
Suggestion: this variety; these varieties
...hey find it easily online. In addition, these variety of online shopping has a wide range of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51658767773 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43070214773 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497630331754 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.801724653 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818038528222 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259586372704 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271307148878 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418167528533 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212184135281 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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