Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays there are many new techniques for people to communicate with others. However, what knid of communication is the best, various people hold different opinions. Some people think face-to-face communication is better than other methods such as email or phone calls, while others disagree. Personally, I believe that email and telephone call are superior than face-to-face communication because they are more convenient and allow people to avoid some embarrassing situations.
Firstly, email and telephone call are more convenient than face-to-face communication. Email and phone call allow businessmen to exchange information immediately. For example, if a businessman has to discuss with his boss about the lastest result of negociation with a client oversea, he doesn't have to fly back and talk to his boss face-to-face, which will take a day or more time. Instead, he can use an email to report the lastest result. What's more, the boss can directly negociate with the client via telephone calls. Therefore, email and telephone calls not only make the global business thrive rapidly but also save a lot time.
Second, email and telephone calls let people avoid embarrassing situations. Take Asia students for example, Asia students are often too shy to ask questions in class. They are afraid of being made a joke by their peers about asking foolish questions in class. However, thanks to email and telephone calls, students are able to ask questions without being overheard by their classmates. These new communication methods encourage students to ask questions which is of benefit to their academic learning.
To sum up, I firmly believe that email and telephone calls are better communication tools than face-to-face communication because they are more convenient and allow people to aviod embarrassing situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: What's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44014084507 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98773155974 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3200126136 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283218476218 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103516361947 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974448561339 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19127041875 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829662061194 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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