Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should
spend more money on improving access to the Internet than on public
transportation.
Nowadays, the government plays a pivotal role in countries improvement. They should be aware that their decisions influence the lives of many people, and it is necessary to invest money in priority. There is no doubt that public transportation plays an important role in the country's development. However, from my point of view, spending money on the internet is even more crucial because it enables the country with economic growth and easy communication and learning.
Since the internet has paved the way people trade, the economy level has been raised. Huge money transactions can be carried out online. That includes bill payments, bank transactions, and purchase of commodities. As consumers are turning to online shopping, businesses are promoting themselves using the same medium. Moreover, fields like advertising and digital marketing have boomed because of the increased use of the internet. Products and goods can be advertised more efficiently over the web. For instance, in my country since the advent of applications like Instagram and Facebook, not only new startups introduced their products quickly, but also offer a discount to acquire customers. Thus, the internet made it easier for businesses to reach abundant customers and promote their band.
Second, the internet provides the most effective means of communication as well as education. Emails and instant messages have made online communication possible. People in different parts of the world can collaborate over the internet. They can exchange views, share information, and work together. It has brought the world closer and made far-off places more reachable.
Moreover, it has made distant learning possible. It brought interactivity in teaching methods. For example, I took an online course on an educational website. It was one of the most valuable courses I ever had. I have met with students from various nationalities in group chats of class. It was an excellent experience for me.
In conclusion, the benefits of the internet in modern society made it a popular weapon leading to a thriving country's economy and easing communication and education.
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- TOEFL TPO 37 integrated writing question 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40419161677 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97228192184 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595808383234 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1911880544 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2083333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107515603296 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263240444211 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029633663148 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554519073758 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304914229211 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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