Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Governments are responsible for improving the societies' progress; they have to analyze various features of fields to distinguish which one is so crucial to invest. Many people opine that arts would be a better choice for governments to be more supported by allocating budgets rather than other fields such as sport. From my point of view, I agree with this group of people, so I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
First, governments should allocate more budget on arts since arts are widely considered a life-transforming opportunity. To clarify more, many people in the country have many aspects of art in their minds, but there are no correct situations to flourish it. Should governments establish some art places, people can register there, where would be a good starting point for them to be a great artist, which will change their life throughout the improvement and progress. My own experience demonstrates this concept; I was always dreaming of being a painter, I was in love of painting during my childhood, I draw pictures everywhere I could find such as books, notebooks, stones and even on white walls. After a while, my parents registered me in a painting class that was a place for me to show my painting talent to the art representatives, who introduced me to the national art academy. Now I have my art exhibit, where I sell my painting panels at a high cost. Hence, if governments put more money on arts, many more people will reach the dreams that would be a great life-transforming to them.
Moreover, the other reason that I expressed about assigning a budget on arts refers to the fact that art is life's soul. As an illustration, many art discoveries in ancient sites show our ancestors accustomed to the art, and even they tried their best to save them during their lifetime. Thus, art is an instinct feature that everybody has, furthermore in this hectic life, having an art helps people to relieve their tensions and makes them relax for a while. Take my brother, for instance; last year he ended up his relationship with his loved girlfriend, the situation was horrible for him and was thinking of the end of the world. My mother bought him a musical instrument, which helped him a lot to pass that time. Eventually, he found himself and now he is so happy about playing Guitar.
By considering all the previously mentioned information, one can conclude that assigning more money to art should be societies' leaders' and governments' priority to take it seriously. By paying attention to this fact, people will obtain a more satisfactory life that supports them to achieve their goals and live peacefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chieve their goals and live peacefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85087719298 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86744175568 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4703236986 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157605893374 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552657692714 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454918401107 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115012980867 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420985863034 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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