Irrefutable, advancement in technology makes everyone's life more convenient. No doubt human activities have negative impacts on earth environment. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, science and technology continuously progressing and explore many impossible activity such as to find water on planet Mar's surface, prices calculations of weather in future , gravitational waves, black hole etc. besides, it also create many problem for people. From the past few decades there is dramatic improvement in transportation at cheap prices so anyone can afford a personal vehicle easily. Consequently, there is a considerable amount of emission of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Everyone likes to visit through airplane. As a result of this the increase temperature on the earth in changing quickly due to this rise in sea level is creating a big problem for the people who living near the coastal area. Due to the burning of fuels as it release many greenhouse gases also create air pollution. People suffering while breathing also other species affected equally. However in the past there were less transportation facilities. people used less fuel burning vehicle. One used boat instead to airplane. So there were less air pollution in the past.
Secondly, medical department also developed enough so that everyone take advantages of these facilities. So as compare to the past there is decrease in death rate. populations on earth is increasing very fast. Of course people need more place to live. Consequently humankind cutting forest to get space and this of course led to endanger of many species which lived in these wild forests .As a result of this there is disturbance in ecological balance, which influence people's life. Due to less plants there is low amount of oxygen and higher amount of other poison gases which led to air pollution along with flood due to reduced trees, which hold the soil. According to a survey there will be no life on the earth in next 50 years due to increased pollution on earth.
In conclusion, no one can deny technology makes our life easy but it increase pollution as well as population on earth which definetaly have adverse effect on earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10298102981 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82087724467 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566395663957 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.2091866882 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8695652174 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0434782609 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82608695652 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110312541088 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314306146346 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350350538239 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783337752575 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235598561174 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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