Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
No one can deny the importance of finding a proper career in the improvement of people's living standards. In this regard, people' s opinions are divided as to wait for a job that would be more satisfying or not. Despite the fact that most persons prefer to wait for a better condition, it is my firm conviction that people can gain higher benefits with opportunity to get a secure job. For a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First, everybody knows that in the competitive world with a progressive rate of population gaining a career is not so easy. In this situation if you reject some jobs opportunities, there are other men and women for capturing a job position and in this circumstance maybe you can't find any occupation even for months. For example, in China with a huge rate of population finding and keeping a job is so difficult and competition between jobs seeker for most of them are so challengeable.
My second reason is that if every individual has a secure job, they can improve their skills and also learning about new things during job preparation. Every job needs its special knowledge and people must see the glass half full. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience.
Ten years ago a company gave me offer to be a digital market expert for them. I accepted that position even my expertise is physics. At first, I was not so happy but after a while I learn more new information in that area. Now I am an expert in physics and digital marketing with a professional background.
In light of the above- mentioned reasons, I strongly believe people should catching chances in their life. Not only for being skillful in other major and gain a worthful experience but also because competition is so high in modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tion and in this circumstance maybe you cant find any occupation even for months. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69846153846 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76302895281 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3095940986 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4375 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300455258443 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869314943419 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829614404056 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147235132974 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082533083533 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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