Today, following the severe economic circumstance every individual person is trying to get a job as soon as possible and make money. Some people believe that if somebody has the opportunity to get a secure job, should take it immediately. However, in my opinion, it is better to wait for a job that will make them satisfied. The following paragraphs will delineate my viewpoint toward this issue.
First and foremost, job satisfaction has a direct impact on quality of life. I mean doing a job that is enjoyable for you will help you to feel peace in your life and throw away your anxiety and stress. For example, I have two cousins, one of them had a job that is not matched his interest but the other one love his job and going to work full of pure happiness every day. Clearly, their life quality is different. The first one often is bored and hopeless and when he is talking about his job you can feel hate in her words and sentences. While the other one that loves his job mostly is more energetic and more active. Also, he is too enthusiastic to talk about his works, share his experience and try to learn new abilities. Hence, by this example, you will understand the importance and influence of job satisfaction at a glance.
In addition, doing a job that is satisfying you will lead to making you more beneficial in your position in the organization or company. In other words, when you doing something that is alongside your interests and you love it, your energy and eagerness will increase your performance quality. So when you doing your duty and responsibility in well-manner, your leader will be enthusiastic to keep you in your current position or even offer you a higher and better position.
In summation, although some people contend that they should say welcome to every job opportunity which is secure, I believe that it is better to wait and choose a job that I love and will satisfy me. This is because doing a loved job can lead to having a happy and peaceful life and help you be more efficient and successful and.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is often
...ife quality is different. The first one often is bored and hopeless and when he is talki...
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Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nce. In addition, doing a job that is satisfying you will lead to making you more benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, i mean, in addition, talking about, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62465753425 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63530599373 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498630136986 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7174414054 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2941176471 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32278799851 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114003809769 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718510981196 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210569968246 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378714042046 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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