Throughout the years, there were a lot of people working on a job that did not satisfy them in some ways, for example, the job had less income, or it was not fit for the person doing it. Also, there were many who liked to just have a secure job and income and did not care about whether it is appealing or not. A controversial debate that is often raised regarding this topic is that whether people should take a secure job right away or they should wait for a more satisfying job. Some people are inclined towards the idea that securing the job as soon as having the opportunity is simply better while others look at this from a different perspective. If I were forced to choose, I prefer to wait until I have the opportunity to get an appealing job for several reasons, and I will elaborate on these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, having only a secure job will have negative effects on a person's future jobs. If you have a daily routine job that you do not like, it may prompt feelings of reluctance and discouragement towards all the jobs you will take from now. Moreover, it causes you to make more mistakes, have less focus on the work, etc. I have to admit that my opinion is profoundly influenced by my personal experience. When I was in high school, I worked in a computer hardware-fixing shop. I did not like the job but I needed the money. Back then, I was only a fourteen-year-old student so my choices for a job were significantly limited. I took the job and after a few months, I hated the concept of working for money. As I am working now in a company as a software engineer, I am still affected by my feelings back then. For this reason, I prefer not to work in a less appealing job.
Another reason which is worth being discussed is that working on this kind of job not only hurts our vision about the jobs but also has some bad effects on our mental health. We may experience unwillingness at first, but it can be developed into severe anxiety attacks or even depression. Drawing from one of my friend's experiences, he was a carpenter about three years ago, and this job was some kind of legacy and tradition in his family. Like me, his goal was to become a software engineer. I did not see him for a while, and when I contacted him after about one year, I heard that he had mild depression. I honestly could not believe the guy who was eager to learn a lot of things in high school, and enthusiastic about the beauty of the world is going through depression. It is certainly clear why I prefer to work on a more satisfying job.
On the other hand, choosing to work on a secure job will ensure having a monthly income. Furthermore, depending on the agreement between us and the company, we can just change our job after a certain amount of time.
In light of the reasons mentioned above, Overall, I genuinely believe that even with having a secure source of income, and the option of changing the job, waiting for a more appealing job is better because there will be no risks involved for my mental health and my future works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...ecure job will have negative effects on a persons future jobs. If you have a daily routin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, honestly, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for example, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 570.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39824561404 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59989641577 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5477954728 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.28 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32337084425 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971943446374 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083049407782 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192663007882 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894506825632 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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